Thread: Don't be dead

Is this an ironic poem? Anyway I love it!!! It just made me smile!!! Really optimistic!!! But you could have wrote it longer...

Thanks but my brother came in so i can't let him see this, he would pick on me for this

your not the only one with a brother who would pick one him for something like that.heck my parents would pic on me for writing a poem.

Originally Posted by Gerky Lee

Don't be dead
i'm eating a bread

Yeah, I dont know if that was supposed to be as funny as it was... but it was.

Originally Posted by Gerky Lee

Thanks but my brother came in so i can't let him see this, he would pick on me for this

That stinks. Oh well nice poem! I can tell it would of been very good if you finish it so hope to see more!

You know, you didnt have to force the poem to rhyme in order to make it funny or.. just plain interesting. In fact, the forced rhyme makes it sound.. bland.

LMAO! this was so random. this is the most random thing i have seen on animeonline yet.