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    Don't be dead

    Don't be dead
    i'm eating a bread
    I will always miss you
    As you are my only true love

    how i miss you so

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    Re: Don't be dead

    Is this an ironic poem? Anyway I love it!!! It just made me smile!!! Really optimistic!!! But you could have wrote it longer...

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    Re: Don't be dead

    Thanks but my brother came in so i can't let him see this, he would pick on me for this

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    Re: Don't be dead

    your not the only one with a brother who would pick one him for something like that.heck my parents would pic on me for writing a poem.

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    Re: Don't be dead

    Quote Originally Posted by Gerky Lee View Post
    Don't be dead
    i'm eating a bread
    Yeah, I dont know if that was supposed to be as funny as it was... but it was.
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    Re: Don't be dead

    Quote Originally Posted by Gerky Lee View Post
    Thanks but my brother came in so i can't let him see this, he would pick on me for this
    That stinks. Oh well nice poem! I can tell it would of been very good if you finish it so hope to see more!
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    Re: Don't be dead

    You know, you didnt have to force the poem to rhyme in order to make it funny or.. just plain interesting. In fact, the forced rhyme makes it sound.. bland.
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    Re: Don't be dead

    LMAO! this was so random. this is the most random thing i have seen on animeonline yet.

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