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Reply With Quotenot bad i like it but it cud be a little longer but hey w/e keep up the good work like to hear more from u soon
I love the ending to it.In my opinion I would change the 2nd stanza to something that fits,but it was creative and original though.It's a good poem aswell^^
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
not bad i like it but it cud be a little longer but hey w/e keep up the good work like to hear more from u soon
Hmm... This poem was as weird as some of the stuff I right
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i like it... but i could be longer. and it doesn't matter what others think of you when you write a poem or a song... all that matters is that it makes u happy. my advice is to ignore what others say and write what u feel like, even if they do pick on u.
Nice poem!
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