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    Don't Doubt Me

    No matter what they say
    It'll never be true
    The lies they tell
    To get between us
    Will never become reality

    Don't doubt my love
    Don't doubt my loyalty

    They're jealous of what we have
    That they can't build the firm relationship we have
    How we are there for each other
    That we know what the other is thinking
    Without saying a single word

    Don't doubt my love
    Don't doubt my intentions

    I'd never betray you
    We've both been hurt too many times
    We'll heal each other's wounds
    The world won't be so cold anymore
    It'll be filled with the warmth of the love we've found for each toher

    Don't doubt my love
    Don't doubt my faith

    I am forever yours
    You will always bemine
    Nothing can seperate us
    No lie
    Not any kind of deception
    So...

    Don't doubt my love
    Don't doubt me

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    i loved it but it was kinda long but i guess you needed ever letter to get you point accros i hope to read another i give this a 5 out of 5

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    wi also give it 5 out of 5 i loved it, it was a good poem and i hope u write more so everyone can enjoy it

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    You write this poem and you know in many love couples have this thoughts and they fair for this people * jealous* because they have in their mind something bad and sometime are kill the love …sorry for long but that what I see it in this poem. That was very nice sweety romantic poem I love read it^^ …nice work and keep it up...^^

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    I loved the poem,but; and plz forgive me; I can' help but wonder does this person ur writing 'bout; if u are; truly doesn' doubt u? 'Cause that what this poem makes me feel. Otherwise, this poem is great.

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    I know for a fact that the person who this poem is for doesn't doubt me at all. More like vice versa. I wrote this to express what I know he feels when I doubt him for no real reason. It truly is a love poem I just didn't want it to be a mushy one...

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    I loved this poem!!!!!!! IT just so cool and in a way so romantic!!!!!! I hope to see more in the future ok!! This poem was just so awesome!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    Quote Originally Posted by NevesElocin View Post
    I know for a fact that the person who this poem is for doesn't doubt me at all. More like vice versa. I wrote this to express what I know he feels when I doubt him for no real reason. It truly is a love poem I just didn't want it to be a mushy one...
    I was going to tell you that I liked this poem, but when I read your commentary on it. How you put yourself in your lovers shoes to write this... That made me me go from liking it, to loving it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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