+ Reply to Thread
Page 2 of 2 FirstFirst 1 2
Results 9 to 15 of 15

Thread: Don't Doubt Me

  1. #9
    Otaku halo3master may be famous one day halo3master may be famous one day halo3master's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    covenant homeplanet
    Posts
    333
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    u think i could use this poem and enter my school writing contest i bet i would win if i use it

  2. #10
    ~Counting Down the Days~ NevesElocin may be famous one day NevesElocin may be famous one day NevesElocin's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2006
    Location
    Hell
    Posts
    862
    Thanks
    48
    Thanked 43 Times in 39 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    Sure I don't mind. Don't get caught and tell me if you win or not. But thats perfectly fine with me if you want to use it.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

  3. #11
    Newbie ME2LOL is off to a good start ME2LOL's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Posts
    85
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    i like it 2 but hey watever if its long more the reason for people to enjoy it

  4. #12
    §-Breakdown-§ Breakout Champion, Bubble Popper Champion Akura13 may be famous one day Akura13's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2007
    Location
    Vancouver! (I wish...)
    Posts
    804
    Thanks
    16
    Thanked 39 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    Oh, wow! I loved it! It's so touchfule! but it makes me sad because I wish I could say the same for me but oh well.....hope 2 see more.



    Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English!
    "Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)

  5. #13
    Dragonrider Ichigo_06 is off to a good start Ichigo_06's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2007
    Location
    Utah
    Posts
    628
    Thanks
    19
    Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    Verry good job Neves. you have surrpased anything I have done. I really love this poem it is a good one and It feels to me as this is from the bottom of your heart and I know how you feel because this is like me and my girl. I also give a 5 of 5 on it great job Neves keep it up.
    ナサン フォオツド
    Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

  6. #14
    ??* Judge and Executioner ??* White Van Man Champion, Home Run Derby Champion, Mahjongg sport Champion, Jewel Champion, The Asteroids Champion koga23 may be famous one day koga23 may be famous one day koga23's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Massachusetts
    Posts
    2,161
    Thanks
    3
    Thanked 18 Times in 15 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    Great poem Its a very meaning full one full of the truth,love and how you felt at the time you wrought it.Once again another great poem from you keep it up.
    ....Player Killer....
    ??* "There is nothing to fear but F.E.A.R. it self -(F.E.A.R) " ??*

  7. #15
    Otaku sangogirl may be famous one day sangogirl may be famous one day sangogirl's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    http://chibitalkatx.blogspot.com/
    Posts
    452
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 12 Times in 12 Posts

    Re: Don't Doubt Me

    i really like this poem i'm not a huge fan of freestyle but this one was really good. i like how you had a pattern that really made your point across i wish i could be like the person in the poem. i understand why you would wright about it.
    every rose has a thorn

+ Reply to Thread
Page 2 of 2 FirstFirst 1 2

Similar Threads

  1. No doubt, No pain, No fear
    By Darkened_Star in forum Poems
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: Apr 30, 2007, 04:00 PM
  2. Without a Doubt
    By The_Pox_Party in forum Poems
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Oct 28, 2006, 05:12 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts