Dont give up? Heh... What if its love that gave up on me?
None the less that was a very possitive poem. Too bad we live in such a negative world. Most of us anyway.... Then again, the world is what you make it
If you have a broken heart
that will never start
If your love ran away
Making you cry all day
If you fell all gone
Then all I have to say is just hold on
So don't you make time to feel regret
You have more loves so don't forget
Stop yourself from feeling down
Or your tears are just going to make you drown and drown
So once that person is finally holding your hand
Thats when you finally make your stand
Once you get that kiss from that angel above
Then thats the reason why I saying don't give up on love
I don't like it that much but I'm just telling people thats all but I do hope you guys like it.
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「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Dont give up? Heh... What if its love that gave up on me?
None the less that was a very possitive poem. Too bad we live in such a negative world. Most of us anyway.... Then again, the world is what you make it
... Not Ever Again...
True True but thank you on the comment by the way hehehehee......![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Lol,
I gave up on love once i wish i never did actully so boring without something or someone to comfort you i get lonley sometimes
I hope i get lucky agian =P
"The good stuff come too the people who wait...."
Awww...I hope for you the same and thanks for the comment as well!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Aw, that's a nice poem. ^_^ I like what way you're putting it across, positive!
I think what you say in this poem true but not all kind of love....
it was a very nice poem...i love read it..hope to see more from you in near time...![]()
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What a nice poem... It really helps a lot ^^ You're right... you should never give up hope on love... I thank this place for bringing my believe back!!! ^^
A really nice work Kuwi, as always ^^
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