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    Don't. Just.

    Dont care.

    Don't pity me.

    Don't try to save me.

    Don't worry about me.

    Don't miss me.

    Don't pretend.

    Don't lie to yourself.

    Don't lie to me.

    Don't hurt me.

    Don't need me.

    Just sit there.

    Just forget about me.

    Just live. Without me.

    Just be happy.

    Just find anybody else.

    Just play.

    Just be easy.

    Just wipe the slate clean of me.

    Just dont.

    Just dont.

    Whatever you do just dont...

    JUST DONT MAKE THE SAME MISTAKE.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Don't. Just.

    Not bad, not bad, I like it alot, even though it has the same thing repeated over lol, looking forward to your next poem.

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    Re: Don't. Just.

    i really like it has emotion. i remind me of how i felt before, i would have liked if you would have used perhaps different wording. but it is very good again love the emotion in it.
    every rose has a thorn

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