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    don't leave me

    The touch of your lips,
    The sound of your voice,
    Your warm hugs,
    Those are the things
    Inever want to lose.
    Your dirty blonde hair
    Your deep blue eyes
    Am I going to see them again?
    I want you here with me
    Please don't leave.
    I'll never love someone else
    More than i love you.
    I promise you that
    I will always
    Be by your side
    No matter what happens.

    i know the poem isn't good but i've tryed

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Re: don't leave me

    i think its really good actually, and i told you before, it doesnt matter how good it is, as long as you put your exact feelings in it.

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    Re: don't leave me

    ^^ it is such a cute poem... i know how u feel my friend... its what we been feeling when we are waiting for loved 1 good job ^^ u expressed and conveyed ur feelings nicely..

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    It's a good poem... *sighs* and now i feel so lonely and miserable.. *sighs*

    It's a fantastic poem and i love it. Even thought it makes me sad... but its such a great poem.. I would like to hear more from you.. keep up the great work^^

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    Re: don't leave me

    thanks guys and girls for reading my poem i never thought anyone is going to like it
    i'll try to write a better one and maybe even happier^^

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    Arekandera dont put your poems down so much alright? they are good poems you put your feelings into them and that is what makes them great. Kepp it up alright? great job on it though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    Arekandera dont put your poems down so much alright? they are good poems you put your feelings into them and that is what makes them great. Kepp it up alright? great job on it though.
    Thanks for the comment Ichigo,and i'll try to make happier poems,but i was gest a little upset about something.that's why this one is sad

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    ah alright well hop you get happy again. keep up the good work.
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