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    DONT Rush Me!

    Don't Rush Me!
    Indecisiveness has ALWAYS been my friend.
    It will last me to my end.
    Longer then you or anyone else.
    So Don't Rush Me.
    You don't like to be rushed.
    If it was you, you'd drag your feet too.
    Don't rush me.
    It makes me aggitated and want to run.
    Out of anger, out of spite.
    Don't rush me.
    Don't make my decisions for me.
    Don't tell me what's right!
    Don't make me rush.
    Rushing causes confusion.
    Rushing will make me wanna fight.
    Stop rushing me!
    It makes me feel trapped,
    Makes me feel I can't chose.
    Don't rush me!
    And try to force my hand.
    Or I'll rush right away from you!

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    This is a really interesting Rush poem you have here though you may need to pace slower, and also you have a great motional state against Rushness.
    I wish to see more of your work in the future. ^_^

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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    This is a really interesting Rush poem you have here though you may need to pace slower, and also you have a great motional state against Rushness.
    I wish to see more of your work in the future. ^_^
    I hate to be late so I rush myself. When someone else rushes me, it's overkill so I can't handle being rushed. I really appriciate your comment and thank you for leaving it. I hope you enjoy my other works aswell as this one. ^.^

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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I hate to be late so I rush myself. When someone else rushes me, it's overkill so I can't handle being rushed. I really appriciate your comment and thank you for leaving it. I hope you enjoy my other works aswell as this one. ^.^
    yeah your welcome and i managed to see your other work very impressive and also the same emotion you feel in the poems that i have seen.

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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    Wow...fast rhythm for a poem about rushing.. @.@ i can't read slow...

    this is filled with annoyance and anger... hmm.. floruished nicely with the pace... it goes fast as anger should be... but... dark1angel's suggestion is good too...

    nicely done again a very nice work ^^

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    Thaanks I'm glad you all liked it... It's hard to slow down pace when you feel your blood boiling and I was pretty annoyed when I wrote this.

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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    I liked it too and to tell yo uthe truth when I am rushed I go slower. I dont like it either unless I have to. keep up the work there bratling
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    Re: DONT Rush Me!

    I see anger! Frustration! Well Duh! I like this one it expressed alot of feelings keepit up! Cant wait for more! I always look forward to your work!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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