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    Dont worry! I'll save her!

    Some red golashes,
    With baggy blue sweats,
    White tighties pulled on board,
    On the outside not within!

    Blue teeshirt sporting
    That famous super man "S"
    Red cape made of a bath towl
    Tied securely in place.

    A pair of goggles,
    To hide big brown eyes
    As chest swells in pride.
    A pair of work glves to fight evil.

    Down the stairs plodding as he goes,
    Out the front door
    And across th expance of the porch,
    Down the walk to the bulivard.

    Fists placed on either hip.
    Manly stance, ready to fight.
    A little boys proud voice declares!
    "Don't worry!! I'll save her!"

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    Happy memories...well almost. This is about my younger brother. When I was in second grade, seven years old. I moved from Fargo,ND to a much bigger city in minnesota. I moved to minneapolis to be with my mom. Mind you in the school I attended until that very point I was the only black student in the whole school until someone adopted a little boy from africa. And until about second grade I was the only minority in the first place. I moved to minneapolis and went to a predominately black school. I was tourtured needless to say. But the worst part about the whole situation was that my busdrive got me lost every day. I was new in a city I knew nothing about I didn't know my way around and all he had to do was let me off the bus on the right corner and have me cross his bus and walk to the end of the street. He almost never put me off on the right corner. I got lost numerous times and my family had to come looking for me. Petite little mixed seven year old me rumaging around the northside (the hood) all by myself. Sometimes for hours. Well once, when the mail man that happened to know my father saw me, he brought me home. When I got there my mom had shown up, and everyone was outside. Including my little brother in his super man gear. They all told me how he was determined to save me and that's what inspired this. wow... I babbled a lot... hope you enjoy.

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    Re: Dont worry! I'll save her!

    I think it's funny. Good writing. ^_^
    Which brother was it? TJ? That's adorable! Good job, Chan.


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    Re: Dont worry! I'll save her!

    OMG...dude... Read it again. It's JOE you freak. Second grade, tj was still in his daddys'.... *cough* ahem...anyways. Yeah, thanks. Glad you likeded it.

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