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    Fallen Angel PhoenixSara may be famous one day PhoenixSara's Avatar
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    Doubts

    When all is quiet and all is meek
    while midnight comes and touches me.
    His kiss is all i can think about,
    his touch tells me his feelings are out.

    The bell always rings and warns my heart
    Saying "here you are again dont fall apart"
    his promise of tomorrow he always gives
    The memory of yesterday, brings me fear.

    The moon calls me to cross the room
    if he loves me why do i feel gloom.
    My heart skips a beat,my eyes turn away
    I sadly ask myself why do i feel this way.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: Doubts

    Hmmm....a good poem I like it....a sad one though a poem of confusion I guess. my favorite part is
    When all is quiet and all is meek
    while midnight comes and touches me.
    His kiss is all i can think about,
    his touch tells me his feelings are out.

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    Re: Doubts

    If you have a real experience with this than you must of been feeling strong
    emotions when you wrote this. The poem is beautiful.

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