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Reply With Quotecould use a little more length..great perspective.definatly needs a spell check.but other than that,keep it up zig!
I know form memorys visions of the
past love dosent fade there powers
will last
Do you know just how I feel or do
you lie is it real unshore like the dove
flying free burning love is binding me
consumed with oppsion call it a cures
love or lust wich ever strikes you worst
could use a little more length..great perspective.definatly needs a spell check.but other than that,keep it up zig!
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very cool but like fallen said more length it felt like you could have added
to it it dosnt seem finished yet to me because i thought where was the rest of it?
i hope to read another because this poem really is good bt it just dosnt seem
finished like i said.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
I was only 12 when I wrote that. I was looking through my things and found it.Do you really think that it needs to be longer? Thank you for your kind words and I am really glad that you liked it. I will write some more after I get over this writters block.
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