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    Dragon ball z Fight

    I feel this power surge
    as from the rubble I emerge
    puzzlement flashes across your face
    you thought you had me beat
    you are going to have to try harder than that if it is me you want to defeat


    Power, strength and confidence
    it fills me to the brink
    the power reacting to my needs before I even think
    I see your attack rolling towards me
    I counter without a thought
    with this power I could destroy you in one signal shot
    In your eyes I see the question, how did I survive?
    you saw me fall you watched me go down
    Your power could have leveled a town


    But we are not done yet
    you are still ready to fight
    I watch as you gather power from light
    calmly I prepare to finish this fight
    I gather my strength and concentrate my ki
    Water, air, earth and fire, so much power that surrounds me
    You hurl forth your sphere
    KAAMAA!
    I wait as the fiery ball nears
    HAAAMAAA!
    The timing must be right the amount of power precise
    HAAAAAA!
    I watch and wait as the dust clears


    I watch with satisfaction as your confidence slips away
    as on the ground you lay
    All the people that you killed....
    I should make you pay
    but you shall not die today
    for how can you be expected to show that witch you never learned?
    So mercy I will show you
    I hope you learn your lesson well and start your life anew
    for next time no mercy will be shown you.

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    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    it is a great poem i could tell you talking bout Goku, say in the third stanza third line down do you mean watch in stead of wach?
    Last edited by Dragons2801; Apr 18, 2010 at 08:05 AM. Reason: wrong stanza

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    lol ya I did that will teach me to look it over before I post.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
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    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    Quote Originally Posted by kingmustang View Post
    lol ya I did that will teach me to look it over before I post.
    lol we all over look somthing.......................................... .......

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    Its spelled rubble...

    a Ruble is a form of Russian currency.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    Beast helped me go through it and make some changes and I think it sounds a lot better now. Thanks again beast.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    nice peom but maybe put a little......never mind. haha
    if i were you i would be having fun everyday and woundnt go to highschool everyday. and hangout oh sundays,mondays and tuesdays

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    Re: Dragon ball z Fight

    Come on tell me you say that and then not tell me it would bug me forever besides I encourage people to state their mind and give all the advice they can think of.So do tell
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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