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Reply With Quoteit is a great poem i could tell you talking bout Goku, say in the third stanza third line down do you mean watch in stead of wach?
I feel this power surge
as from the rubble I emerge
puzzlement flashes across your face
you thought you had me beat
you are going to have to try harder than that if it is me you want to defeat
Power, strength and confidence
it fills me to the brink
the power reacting to my needs before I even think
I see your attack rolling towards me
I counter without a thought
with this power I could destroy you in one signal shot
In your eyes I see the question, how did I survive?
you saw me fall you watched me go down
Your power could have leveled a town
But we are not done yet
you are still ready to fight
I watch as you gather power from light
calmly I prepare to finish this fight
I gather my strength and concentrate my ki
Water, air, earth and fire, so much power that surrounds me
You hurl forth your sphere
KAAMAA!
I wait as the fiery ball nears
HAAAMAAA!
The timing must be right the amount of power precise
HAAAAAA!
I watch and wait as the dust clears
I watch with satisfaction as your confidence slips away
as on the ground you lay
All the people that you killed....
I should make you pay
but you shall not die today
for how can you be expected to show that witch you never learned?
So mercy I will show you
I hope you learn your lesson well and start your life anew
for next time no mercy will be shown you.
Thanks Beast
Last edited by kingmustang; Apr 20, 2010 at 02:42 PM.
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.
it is a great poem i could tell you talking bout Goku, say in the third stanza third line down do you mean watch in stead of wach?
Last edited by Dragons2801; Apr 18, 2010 at 08:05 AM. Reason: wrong stanza
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
kingmustang (Apr 18, 2010)
lol ya I did that will teach me to look it over before I post.
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
lol we all over look somthing.......................................... .......Originally Posted by kingmustang
lol ya I did that will teach me to look it over before I post.
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
Its spelled rubble...
a Ruble is a form of Russian currency.
kingmustang (Apr 18, 2010)
Beast helped me go through it and make some changes and I think it sounds a lot better now.Thanks again beast.
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
!beast (Apr 20, 2010)
nice peom but maybe put a little......never mind. haha
if i were you i would be having fun everyday and woundnt go to highschool everyday. and hangout oh sundays,mondays and tuesdays
Come on tell me you say that and then not tell me it would bug me forever
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
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