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    Dragons rage

    its like fire inside that
    dragon not say it hate and fear that fulls it
    things around it makes him go crazy
    it scrams in madness and hate
    the rage burns inside he cant let it out
    monster that he cant calm and makes him go hate
    the rage binds him long with hate and madness
    he wish it word end but it never does
    the rage of the dragon its painless
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    Re: Dragons rage

    Try to capitalize it and it will sound better, other than that it sound good keep it up.

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    Re: Dragons rage

    i thought it was quite interesting and i enjoyed reading it

    hot feets for dat azz

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    Re: Dragons rage

    I like the whole dragon theme. ^_^ The lack of comma's and periods does bother me a bit though. ^_^ I like it! Keep up the good work.

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