I will take this no more.
Drama in my life is dead.
Bring it to me,
and find it burnt to the core.
Find it a charred ash,
beneath my feet,
in you deside,
that an acting needs to be done.
Find yourself a life,
for I'm not about to ruin mine.
Done with "games".
Allow me one time,
to tell you this.
Drama no more,
I am done with it.
@.@ ooh.. my... someone is ticked off... :p The annoyance can be felt... nicely done... you could do more description to flourish that... keep it up...
I like the way you play with words... ^^
i completly agree with you Ray^^
he does need to work on descreption but the poem it's nicely done(like you said)
and he doesn play with words^^
anyway interesting poem Shade:) keep up the good work
oooh nicely done1^^:D it had a nice flow to it
especially the emotion of annoyance^^
:) keep up the good work^^