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  1. Nov 09, 2007 08:04 PM #1
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    Drama

    I will take this no more.
    Drama in my life is dead.
    Bring it to me,
    and find it burnt to the core.

    Find it a charred ash,
    beneath my feet,
    in you deside,
    that an acting needs to be done.

    Find yourself a life,
    for I'm not about to ruin mine.
    I'm done.
    Done with "games".

    Allow me one time,
    to tell you this.
    Drama no more,
    I am done with it.


    .....

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  2. Nov 10, 2007 04:41 AM #2
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    Re: Drama

    @.@ ooh.. my... someone is ticked off... The annoyance can be felt... nicely done... you could do more description to flourish that... keep it up...

    I like the way you play with words... ^^
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  3. Nov 10, 2007 08:47 AM #3
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    Re: Drama

    i completly agree with you Ray^^
    he does need to work on descreption but the poem it's nicely done(like you said)
    and he doesn play with words^^
    anyway interesting poem Shade keep up the good work

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  4. Nov 11, 2007 10:01 PM #4
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    Re: Drama

    oooh nicely done1^^ it had a nice flow to it
    especially the emotion of annoyance^^
    keep up the good work^^
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