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Dream
You toss and turn and break a sweat
Wake up with tears your pillows wet
You’re drowning in a river of your hopelessness
If only I could save you now
There’s got to be some way somehow
To let you know how I feel inside
Cause it’s so obvious and hard to hide
But if you really didn’t care why was I there
The color of my eyes the scent of my hair
Now I know dreams aren’t reality
But it’s so real so real to me
I can take a dream and tell you that I love you lady
You couldn’t see that I was always there for you
Remembering the time we spent together
Came true to me one night I had a dream
This is not my usual style of writing but I thought I give something new a try!
Wow that was an awesome peom, filled with emotion, I like so much i showed much devotion
Shippo is determined to become a lvl higherI'm a solider of Pen and Paper!<3 Atomik_Sprout <3
Thank you Shippo101 for you awesome comment and cheerful rhyme! I appreciate you reading my poem!
It was pretty good, i actually enjoyed reading it.
1st Sig finished 12-20-09
That was awesome buddy!!I loved the rhyming in it. ^_^ Nice job. 10/10 lol I don't see anything wrong with this poem either. O btw for this being a first, it was good. ^_^ Your getting better and better!
Thanks lifeforce! (:
anime_being_god: thanks for the awesome comment I truly appreciate it!
fma1012: Okay sorry about the little buddy comment!And thank you for helping me in my time of need! You and Shini are Awesome!
Omg!!! I'm speachless.This was really amazing! Truely awesome Fox!!! I sooo loved it!!! Ya know,this could make a really good song.I even started singing it 2 myself while I was reading it lol.Amazing as always Fox!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
Dude that was a pretty kool peom. I like the second stanza the most because you it caught my attention. Nicely well written.
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