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    dream

    Shadowy spirits appear
    From those memories long past
    Things long forgotten

    But yet not ravaged by time
    No one can sense them
    But yet they haunt your mind

    some thoughts bad, but most are good
    minds fill with emotion
    some may wake, while most do not
    Last edited by Dragons2801; Apr 24, 2010 at 01:26 PM.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: dream

    it it Very true, and it is easy to relate to.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: dream

    Don't think I have seen the freeverse milwr before. Interesting.

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    Re: dream

    thanks i tried to make somthing different. and i sort of wrote it fast.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: dream

    i like it. even it's short but you did show how memories are important tough sometimes they're not good.....
    Last edited by ines; Apr 14, 2010 at 02:00 PM.

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