I thought it was pretty good.
Usually I am not one for poems that have that have alot of rhyming in them, but I actually liked this one.
I could tell that you actually experienced something painful and you weren't just pretending to write about something you had never experienced before.
It was really heartfelt, great job, I look forward to seeing more ^-^


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