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    Dream World

    Imagine that forever was really always
    Then eternity we will live to see better days
    Imagine that people pick love over hate
    Then we all will be in a line ole' so straight

    That pierce through the heart
    Like an arrown in which Cupid shot
    Aiming towards heaven
    But tied down to hell with many knots

    Reaching for the skies
    But held down by all the hurt & lies
    Release all your pain to let your soul cry
    Asking you Creator questions like why

    They say you're not supposed to question him
    But still you try
    You was dealt a bad hand that you don't like
    But the person you are you stand & fight

    You still lay all your cards on the table
    But in the end you still was not able
    Did you even have a chance to win
    Was your options just oddly thin

    Or was you just already dead from within
    Couldn't keep up with the constant crying
    But was at a steadily pace of the feeling of dying

    Imagine that others also forgave you for your sins
    You would have forgiveness with new begininngs
    Ever-lasting possibilities that's never ending
    To "pay it forward" won't be the only message we're sending

    The need to be truthful & no more pretending
    You won't have to worry about all the people you are offending
    Cause you're being nobody but yourself
    People accept you for who you are & no one else

    But people always have to change
    So I doubt if things will remain the same
    Imagine that life was more than a survival game
    Then you would have more people know beauty & understand it's name

    Imagine that morality was more than a mendacity
    A falsehood of our children's childhood
    In which we can change
    Cause that isn't how it has to be

    Imagine this was more than a poem
    We can use this as a guideline & to the world we will show them

    Imagine that even in this world
    I didn't have to consider the good with the bad
    But we all know people are going to be people
    Imagining a dream world is insanely mad...

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Dream World

    @.@ wow... what imagination... very nice... love the methaphores good job... im impressed..

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    Re: Dream World

    woooow i dont no what to say that is one of the greatest poem i have read on here in a long while great rhyming and i can really imagine every word you writen there fantastic poem. write more

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    Re: Dream World

    wow alot of very beutiful writing here im impressed very good i love it!!!!!!
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    Re: Dream World

    Very nice poem. I like the connections. And also the rhyming was pretty good. I'd like to see more out of you.

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    Re: Dream World

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    @.@ wow... what imagination... very nice... love the methaphores good job... im impressed..
    I try to have a imagination ^_^ ... It might not be as good as it 1nce was, but thanks for the compliment... I have people like you to study from when it comes to my metaphores...

    Quote Originally Posted by Tom2Ace View Post
    woooow i dont no what to say that is one of the greatest poem i have read on here in a long while great rhyming and i can really imagine every word you writen there fantastic poem. write more
    You give me too much credit, but I am glad that you like it & that you have that "imagination" which I had when I wrote this when you was reading it... Thanks...

    Quote Originally Posted by iluvmyloser View Post
    wow alot of very beutiful writing here im impressed very good i love it!!!!!!
    I 'ppreciate the compliment, especially since I thought your "imagine a world" was good... Thanks!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Chaos105 View Post
    Very nice poem. I like the connections. And also the rhyming was pretty good. I'd like to see more out of you.
    You seem to pick up what I was trying to connect the good with the bad & I very much am impressed by that cause not many understand where I go with my writing & where I was trying to end up... But who knows maybe that means for me to get better... Thanks a million!!! I will write/post more in the near future...

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