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    Dreamer

    The time we spent together,
    Was that just a illusion to you?
    The songs I sang to you,
    I wish they would be heard.
    There you are with that look on your face,
    Like your never sad.

    So let me say to you,
    I love your peaceful eyes on me.
    Darling so come with me,
    If you have enough love for me.

    Tears if your holding back,
    Or pain if thats what it is.
    If you frown then I'll know,
    That I am just a dreamer...

    Comment please

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    Re: Dreamer

    O thats so sweet but kinda sad almost want to make me cry. ^-^


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: Dreamer

    That's a really nice poem. You did a good job. I look forward to reading your next one.

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    Ty I love poetry again yay! I'll write many more

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    Re: Dreamer

    Well, I want more imagery. I couldnt imagine anything about this poem but this verse: So let me say to you,
    I love your peaceful eyes on me.
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    Re: Dreamer

    i liked it. makes me wonder if i perfer reading poetry or writing it. keep it up!

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    hey u rock that was so cool wow
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    Re: Dreamer

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Well, I want more imagery. I couldnt imagine anything about this poem but this verse: So let me say to you,
    I love your peaceful eyes on me.
    Kk next time I'll be more vivid, thanks for the comments

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