+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 8 of 9

Thread: Dreaming

  1. #1
    Newbie evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Location
    I'm not in Michigan anymore.....that means I'm getting closer to you
    Posts
    96
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts

    Dreaming

    I'm living in my own world
    One where things are totally different
    People are happy here
    Including me
    Even my family is smiling
    It's kinda wierd
    Better than what I'm used to
    I love it anyway
    Here, people are glad to see me
    No one is turning away an leaving me alone
    I wish I could stay here forever
    Sadly, I have to wake up

  2. #2
    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    2,736
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    It's a cute & simple poem. And that's about it. Nothing stands out.
    Seduced by Flesh


  3. #3
    Decapitation?DontBePicky! Raimann may be famous one day Raimann may be famous one day Raimann's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Toronto
    Posts
    655
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    [QUOTE]
    I'm living in my own world
    One where things are totally different
    People are happy here

    ^^

    this is like a poem that when i read it, it makes me think of a 'perfect' world where its possible, but the flaws of humanity keep it away from perfection.
    thats wut i think
    nice ideas

    Want Credits Fast? Love The Thrill Of Gambling? Then Come On Down And See For Yourself!
    http://www.animeonline.net/f5/nfl-football-31440/

  4. #4
    Newbie evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Location
    I'm not in Michigan anymore.....that means I'm getting closer to you
    Posts
    96
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    thank you all, i was nervous at posting it, cuz it's my shortest poem ever

  5. #5
    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Somewhere in SD.
    Posts
    2,596
    Thanks
    17
    Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    doens't matter if it is short as long its good you get good comments lol keep it up

  6. #6
    x._Loveless.Murder_.x Aiora may be famous one day Aiora may be famous one day Aiora's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Under your bed.
    Posts
    633
    Thanks
    5
    Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    lol what a cute little poem lol, i like it lots =P


    -".. Chase the morning, yield for nothing."

  7. #7
    Otaku Mattness may be famous one day Mattness may be famous one day Mattness's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    Chapel Hill, North Carolina
    Posts
    311
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    doens't matter if it is short as long its good you get good comments lol keep it up
    I love the poem! The simplicity stands out. I hope you keep posting things.(Not all your works must be finished eather!)

  8. #8
    Newbie evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day evil_neko_youkai may be famous one day
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Location
    I'm not in Michigan anymore.....that means I'm getting closer to you
    Posts
    96
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts

    Re: Dreaming

    again thanxx, ya'll!!! im soo glad u all lliked it!!!

+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. Real or Still Dreaming
    By Ky-lyrra in forum Cyber Lounge
    Replies: 18
    Last Post: Jan 19, 2007, 04:00 PM
  2. Just dreaming
    By Elreka in forum Poems
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: May 23, 2006, 01:57 PM
  3. I'm Dreaming....[Love Poem]
    By Wrath in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: May 11, 2005, 04:39 AM
  4. Give Me a Good Reason Why I Should Stop Dreaming
    By eleonne in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: Feb 16, 2005, 12:54 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts