Thread: Dreaming in Blood

that poem is great good choces of words in this i give u 9/10

it was the colour of text its hard to see.... if it was easyer seen it was totaly a 10/10 mark from me ^^

I wanted the color to be somewhat "blood-related"
Well,thank you anyways. In the near future i'll remember to use brighter colors ^^;

wow... this is good.. i like it very much... very short but it tells what you want to convey.. i can't do that well... i give description to tell what i want mostly

nicely done

Nice,

I agree with some, The description was excellent , Whoever the writing was hard to read with the dark red colour.

I liked it because I think from my point of view that it's definitely very unique.


I'd love to read more of your poems.

-Zainab

I really enjoy this poem. I can relate to the sentiment but it was also really well conveyed beautifully written and well worded too. I like this one a -lot-. Thanks for posting it.

I think it was quite powerful, i like poems i do them my self. it's short but effective. I had a bit of trouble trying to read the text thought and i can understand why you did that color too.

Good work!