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    Re: dreams?

    *gasp* awww...man! i missed u! well, i thought i needed a lil more work on poem.


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    Re: dreams?

    Quote Originally Posted by royal cutie pain

    inside of us there live a light
    burning like fire in the night.

    gleaming down and lighting the way
    for hopes and dreams to shine someday.

    it gives a brilliance to our lives
    and sparkles like diamonds

    with a glowing light.
    so hold our your light

    for all to see,
    and never let go
    your dreams are the key

    I see you made a poem about me, so your dreams can come true. lol jk jk jk

    hmmm I am going 2 print this poem becasue it's really great.
    Last edited by sora the king of dreams; Jun 19, 2006 at 07:35 AM.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    oi? oi? print! u don't have 2.


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    Re: dreams?

    i think u shud edit this part-
    so hold our your light
    coz it think it's ON rather than OUR....

    some stanzas are rather weird...like they shud be joint together instead of being apart-
    it gives a brilliance to our lives
    and sparkles like diamonds

    with a glowing light.
    so hold our your light
    overall it's really nc^^ juz a few errors

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    ooopsies *blush* thanks 4 that!!!


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    Re: dreams?

    short, but nicely well written, keep it up!

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    okies. thanks 4 everything u guys!


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