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    Re: Dreams

    And in my dreams you’re always there,
    Right along beside me-
    And whenever I need any help,
    You’re always there to guide me.
    ^ I really liked this passage.
    This poem was put together very nicely. You did a very good job capturing the whole feel and concept of dreams. I look forward to reading more. ^_^

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    Re: Dreams

    thanks reese! i really liked your poem 'the forsaken'
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: Dreams

    awesome, apparently you have the kind of dreams where you can control what you're doing, unlike me

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    In my dreams I can do nothing,
    In my dreams I can do all.
    ^those 2 would be my favorite stanzas of this poem, it all sounded really great and that was a pretty bitter twist in the 2nd in that last verse

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    Re: Dreams

    thanks! i was kinda going for that complete change in the mood at the end- i'm glad to hear that you liked it!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    ^ well, if that's what you were aiming for, you deffinatly got it right on in my opinion

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    Re: Dreams

    In the dreamworld doing anything at all............but there is one constant and tht is ur loved one......this is a good poem poem, it flows quite well

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    thanks Rei_unit00, and blade!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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