*rubs eyes* O_O.... Could it be? Scotty poetry!! ^_^ WOOTNESS!!
My analyse :
You have a few.... just a few minor spelling/grammatical errors. But aside that the poem had a very good flow and rhythm to it. I couldn't interpret a couple of statements, but I'm assuming : Hidden messages.
My favy quote :
COOL!! I always enjoy a quote where two differing entities are put together - perfectly, beautifully. Keep writing Scotty-boy, I'll be sure to comment. ^_^Coldness That Can Burn a Person
YAYNESS!! First to comment. WOOO!!