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    dreams

    dreams are good dreams are great
    my dreams are evil as of late
    my dreams wake me up and tear my inside
    my dreams are of love which i have been denied
    my dreams were sweet but now there not
    my dreams can't sleep until i'm gone
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: dreams

    lol do you like writing short poems? lol writing them are ok but you shouldnt make a habbit of doing the same style over and over again. myabe try a haiku or something. because using the same style over and over again people get bored with your work and soon they stop posting or even replying to it.
    just a hint.
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