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    dreams

    One life i live
    and in One i dream
    Both are distinguishable
    But yet inseparable

    Every day gets worse
    Telling the two apart
    Each day another stake pierces my heart
    I have to live this godforsaken curse

    But I do not wither
    I do not fade
    My heart gets stronger
    Numbing the pain

    As the years go on my heart can not bear
    The thoughts of reality that are not even there
    My sole crumbles, breaks, and shatters
    The blood from my heart now spatters
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    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: dreams

    I love it! You have a talent -bows- We must collaborate on a poem together! =)

    Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent

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    Re: dreams

    That is amazing!! And I can relate to it in a way. I think every one has an ideal or fantasy world that they go to when reality gets to hard to deal with and some times, and for some people fantasy and reality clash when the hart or mind can not take any more, hence the reason their are crazy people.lol
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    Re: dreams

    thank you all, i would look forward to making a poem together Avea-kun.
    i love getting other peoples views.

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    Re: dreams

    Quote Originally Posted by kingmustang View Post
    That is amazing!! And I can relate to it in a way. I think every one has an ideal or fantasy world that they go to when reality gets to hard to deal with and some times, and for some people fantasy and reality clash when the hart or mind can not take any more, hence the reason their are crazy people.lol
    Not so much as crazy people, more as like people with a high and vivid imagination. Oh..and now I'm supposed to be crazy? lol j/k. But it ishighly rare to find someone with an imagination that is used all the time, someone who can make poems at ease, as well as stories and songs. I am one of those people, and I believe Deyoki-kun is one too -smiles-

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    thank you all, i would look forward to making a poem together Avea-kun.
    i love getting other peoples views.
    Yay!! I love writing poems! I write many in my head each day, but since I do not write them down, and have short term memory I seem to forget bit and pieces, or all of them. Anyywhoo! Can't wait to callorborate with you Deyoki-kun! -bows smiling-

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    Re: dreams

    Its put together very well. I like it of course.

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