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    dreams of my love

    I love you so much I have dreams of you


    These past few nights I have dreamt of you.

    The fist night we met in the air port

    As soon as I seen you my heart sank and I ran into your arms and cried and
    told you I how much I love you.

    As I have said before I could never lie to the one I truly love witch is you.

    My second night

    We were in a park, acting like kids totally in love. In the darkness we kissed
    deeply and passionately even if other people seen...



    Last night

    You were in my house helping me bring stuff up to the rooms and i asked you
    to stay the night...

    You were going to sleep on the couch but I wouldn’t let you so you ended up
    sleeping in my bed along with me... just to feel your warmth and feel your
    arm around me feels like everything in the world has gone the right way,
    nothing to worry about...

    Yet after each dream I cried

    Knowing that we aren’t together and that I still love you after what all
    happened I never felt this way for ANYONE in my life... I just wish we could
    be together

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    Re: dreams of my love

    awww thats so cute, really love the emotion, Thats some true love right there ^^

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    Re: dreams of my love

    it's really good!!! it shows so much emotion!!! i hope u still know that ur not allowed to get married and no boys til sixteen

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    awww its so cute good poem keep up the good work hope to see more from u

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    Re: dreams of my love

    thank you all soo much for your kind comments nice to know real feelings can be well commented on ^__^

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    Re: dreams of my love

    Wow! Good job on this and "Awating my love". (did I get the title right?)

    I can totally understand where you're coming from. I kind of have the same problems. You should read my poem titled "Nine", or any of my writings involved with love. You'll see we have plenty in common. ^_^ I told myself and the one I love that I will wait. But after nine months, I find myself in between waiting and wanting to move on. Love is complicated and the pain that comes with heartbreak is even more so. I wish you the best of luck and hope that you can work through the pain; just as I am trying to work through mine. ^_^

    Once again, good job!


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    Re: dreams of my love

    This poem is so sweet and dreamy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Great words!!!!!!!!
    Nice Job!!!!!!!1
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    Re: dreams of my love

    this is so sweet that I almost cry. I love it, I wish I can write like that.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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