awww thats so cute, really love the emotion, Thats some true love right there ^^
l8ters
I love you so much I have dreams of you
These past few nights I have dreamt of you.
The fist night we met in the air port
As soon as I seen you my heart sank and I ran into your arms and cried and
told you I how much I love you.
As I have said before I could never lie to the one I truly love witch is you.
My second night
We were in a park, acting like kids totally in love. In the darkness we kissed
deeply and passionately even if other people seen...
Last night
You were in my house helping me bring stuff up to the rooms and i asked you
to stay the night...
You were going to sleep on the couch but I wouldn’t let you so you ended up
sleeping in my bed along with me... just to feel your warmth and feel your
arm around me feels like everything in the world has gone the right way,
nothing to worry about...
Yet after each dream I cried
Knowing that we aren’t together and that I still love you after what all
happened I never felt this way for ANYONE in my life... I just wish we could
be together
awww thats so cute, really love the emotion, Thats some true love right there ^^
l8ters
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it's really good!!! it shows so much emotion!!! i hope u still know that ur not allowed to get married and no boys til sixteen
awww its so cute good poem keep up the good work hope to see more from u
thank you all soo much for your kind comments nice to know real feelings can be well commented on ^__^
Wow! Good job on this and "Awating my love". (did I get the title right?)
I can totally understand where you're coming from. I kind of have the same problems. You should read my poem titled "Nine", or any of my writings involved with love. You'll see we have plenty in common. ^_^ I told myself and the one I love that I will wait. But after nine months, I find myself in between waiting and wanting to move on. Love is complicated and the pain that comes with heartbreak is even more so. I wish you the best of luck and hope that you can work through the pain; just as I am trying to work through mine. ^_^
Once again, good job!
This poem is so sweet and dreamy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great words!!!!!!!!
Nice Job!!!!!!!1
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
this is so sweet that I almost cry. I love it, I wish I can write like that.
Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...
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