Dreams of you

Dreams of you…

Here I lay, awake again
How many times is that now?
The dream is back, always the same
I wish for it to end, but how?

You are gone from my life
Destiny took you from me
This is the cause of all my strife
Your lovely face is all I can see

The dreams of you are so vivid
So clear in my mind
I feel your presence so often, I get shivers
I turn around but you are not there

I want it all to end
The dreams of you, I cannot take
For my mind to mend
I dream of you and then I wake.

Thanx to all that read my poem.

Hmmm this is nicely written.. i like the flow of this poem..it's very smooth..and the description is a bit vague..but still good.. ^^

Hmmm i think the ending is a bit hanging... you should make a better ending... it feels as if it's not complete...

Nicely written... good job ^^

Well thank you for the comment Rayme.
I know what you mean. but it is complete.
and adding any more would ruin the poem.