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    A Drink For The Many Pitiful

    Rain proves of a merciful ruler
    One that will eventually take away this water
    And leave us to drench in the dry earth
    All will fight over the remaining supply of life
    But this ruckus will kill many
    Savage beast are form out of fear
    But for now the rain falls
    Yet again we are given a chance to live
    A chance to prove worthy of this gift
    The rain hit’s the pavement
    Simultaneously in a steady rhythm
    The pavement proves a worthy canvas for the newly formed eternal

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    Re: A Drink For The Many Pitiful

    But for now the rain falls
    Yet again we are given a chance to live
    A chance to prove worthy of this gift
    this poem has a good flow to it. makes you think but i like these three lines. hoping to ee more poems from you mere
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    Re: A Drink For The Many Pitiful

    mere is was auseome i like this part idk why is just stuck out to me
    Yet again we are given a chance to live
    A chance to prove worthy of this gift

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    Re: A Drink For The Many Pitiful

    this is a great poem,there a deep meaning into it and i like this part the best


    Rain proves of a merciful ruler
    One that will eventually take away this water
    And leave us to drench in the dry earth
    All will fight over the remaining supply of life
    But this ruckus will kill many
    Savage beast are form out of fear
    sometimes i wish i never existed
    -heartless.DY-025

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