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Reply With Quotethis poem has a good flow to it. makes you think but i like these three lines. hoping to ee more poems from you mereBut for now the rain falls
Yet again we are given a chance to live
A chance to prove worthy of this gift
Rain proves of a merciful ruler
One that will eventually take away this water
And leave us to drench in the dry earth
All will fight over the remaining supply of life
But this ruckus will kill many
Savage beast are form out of fear
But for now the rain falls
Yet again we are given a chance to live
A chance to prove worthy of this gift
The rain hit’s the pavement
Simultaneously in a steady rhythm
The pavement proves a worthy canvas for the newly formed eternal
this poem has a good flow to it. makes you think but i like these three lines. hoping to ee more poems from you mereBut for now the rain falls
Yet again we are given a chance to live
A chance to prove worthy of this gift
"In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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mere is was auseome i like this part idk why is just stuck out to me
Yet again we are given a chance to live
A chance to prove worthy of this gift
this is a great poem,there a deep meaning into it and i like this part the best
Rain proves of a merciful ruler
One that will eventually take away this water
And leave us to drench in the dry earth
All will fight over the remaining supply of life
But this ruckus will kill many
Savage beast are form out of fear
sometimes i wish i never existed-heartless.DY-025
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