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Newbie | Hope you enjoy this. I'm not the best poet, but I try. Drowning My heart is soaked, dipped in water made of liquid nails and glass Time stands still while the calendar strips away its pages I shiver in the wind as it tries to knock me over Into the lake of loveless comfort and deaf lies No rope to grab anymore because no ships sail in this sea No one to save me from falling Ice grips my hands and pulls me downward The air is spilt from my lungs For all the precious pretty once known to all never learned to swim And though I stay floating for a short moment I soon plummet beneath the shadows Held onto by desperate serpents and sharks together And ripped apart by the fishermen who only want my worth If I'm drowning And the water is swallowing me whole Then where will I be On the other-side of the spectrum? And if I'm drowning And no one cares Does it have significance? The precious pretty never learned to swim No one taught it how So if I'm drowning And I lost my faith Is it my fault? |
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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,320 | Re: Drowning it isnt your fault at all that you were pulled down by sorrow and anguish of the one who dosn't care. you should rely on your on inner instinct to giud you through the matters of the heart. at least what i understand from what your saying here, reall awesome poem |
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