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    Hope you enjoy this. I'm not the best poet, but I try.


    My heart is soaked, dipped in water made of liquid nails and glass
    Time stands still while the calendar strips away its pages
    I shiver in the wind as it tries to knock me over
    Into the lake of loveless comfort and deaf lies

    No rope to grab anymore because no ships sail in this sea
    No one to save me from falling
    Ice grips my hands and pulls me downward
    The air is spilt from my lungs

    For all the precious pretty once known to all never learned to swim
    And though I stay floating for a short moment
    I soon plummet beneath the shadows
    Held onto by desperate serpents and sharks together
    And ripped apart by the fishermen who only want my worth

    If I'm drowning
    And the water is swallowing me whole
    Then where will I be
    On the other-side of the spectrum?

    And if I'm drowning
    And no one cares
    Does it have significance?

    The precious pretty never learned to swim
    No one taught it how
    So if I'm drowning
    And I lost my faith
    Is it my fault?

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    Re: Drowning

    it isnt your fault at all that you were
    pulled down by sorrow and anguish
    of the one who dosn't care. you should
    rely on your on inner instinct to giud you
    through the matters of the heart. at least
    what i understand from what your saying here,
    reall awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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