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    Drowning Of The Fallen

    Here's some new Lyrics that I wrote yesterday.There a bit dark like some of my others but I still think they came out like I wanted lol Please comment,Thanks.


    Title-Drowning Of The Fallen


    Dead to this world
    Nowhere to be seen
    Nowhere to hide
    I can't Breath!

    The sea's are risin
    I'm going under
    I try to get Free
    But they wont Let Me Leave!
    I'm Drowning

    Hands wrap around my neck
    Arms around my waist
    Pulling me Below
    Going so slowly
    It's Killing Me!
    I'm Drowning!

    The sea slips into my Lungs
    Firey water is inside of Me
    Burning me to the Core!
    I begin to fade and slip away
    I'm Drowning Slowly!

    I foalt in the Never Ending Sea
    I'm going Below
    Hands hold me tight
    Pulling Me Slowly
    I'm Falling
    My insides are on Fire!

    I hit the bottom of the ocean floor..
    It's over...
    I've finally Drowned....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    wow describing you won death is a new way of writing for you
    i like this its so morbid and so sad and hopless i love it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    Thanks Chris H. Happy that you love it. And it is a bit of a new way of writting for me isn't it lol
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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    it sounds like an end to an adventure..................i really liked it..............

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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    Thank you very much Heartless_Mage. I'm happy that you liked it.
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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    was this a metaphor or what??????????????????because i wish to know what was pulling her/him/you/?

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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    Oh...not 2 sure really lol..Hmmm..I guess you could say it was the souls of the sea that were pulling..
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    Re: Drowning Of The Fallen

    sounds cool.......................by the way did you read my first chapter of my book the second one goes up probably tuesday............................

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