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    Cool The Drug Dealer

    I can tell...
    This isnt going the way you would've hoped.
    Erase your hell.
    Blow it out, and drown in my methods of which to cope.
    Break it down.
    Its because he doesn't love you.
    Pour it out.
    Deafen your ears to what they're all thinking of you.

    Nevermind!
    The walls you built.
    Quiet!
    That forceful voice of guilt.
    Inhale it,
    to cloud the truth... just to like yourself.
    Drink it down,
    to fill a void... left by someone else.

    You keep yourself chained to this dreadful place.
    Yet, you insist... you want to be free.
    When the poisons absorbed, and the smoke dissipates.
    You're left standing in your own debris.

    Roll up!
    Twist up reality, dont leave any holes.
    Enough!
    Of this poison will murder any soul.
    Thinking hard...
    Try to remember what went on last night.
    Refill the void.
    Your cup is empty. Do you need a light?

    Ive got it.
    What you need... in a bottle, in a sack.
    I can spot it.
    All that baggage you've got sitting on your back.
    Light it up.
    Don't think about it. Whatever you do... don't hesitate.
    Take that shot.
    I don't want you to know, in life, its never too late.

    Im your drug dealer.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Drug Dealer

    Holly crap! i had never even wondered to see a poem named "The Drug Dealer", dude that was freaking wicked, i liked it keep it up.

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    Wow... I wasn't sure that anyone would get it. Im kind of fighting some addictions. I was just trying to express the darkside of a reality.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Drug Dealer

    I love the flow, well done. I like the content, nice to see poetry written about something other than love.
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    Re: The Drug Dealer

    sweet poem girl!!!!!!! *snaps* love the flow and yea!!! drug dealer. "IM YOUR DRUG DEALER"

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    Gee, that makes me wanna light up righhht noooww................*flicks the lighter and lights the bowl*
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Wow, what a creative poem, peach! Very much enjoyable! I liked it. Nice job! Can't wait for another one.

    And I agree with kasai. It's nice to see a poem being written about something other than "love". Nice work.

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    Re: The Drug Dealer

    This poem makes me so glad I don't do drugs. It was kinda scary. I liked it.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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