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    Drunk

    Upon a moment of peace,
    There is nothing to fear.
    Within a time of recollections.
    While on a complete euphoric moment,
    There is nothing to understand.
    Finally as time goes by,
    Time seems to come back in existance,
    Yet once again the dizzyness comes back.
    Where alcohol comes into place,
    Water may save the day.




    Note: I drank lots so if this seems strange, it's normal. Please comment.
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    Re: Drunk

    Well if I wasn't talking to you on MSN and didn't know exactly what was happening then I would have been sitting here scratching my head trying to figure out what you meant. I like it in a way because it's what your feeling but some of the words I'm ashamed to say but I don't know them. Now go to bed please sleep it off!
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    Re: Drunk

    Wonderful poem, Max. In fact, I may prefer this to all of your other works. It's short and sweet. And there's something about the simplicity of the words.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Drunk

    Awesome poem! I honestly would not have been able to put the experience of being drunk into words! Nice job and you really have a way with word! Excellent job Soldat of Life!

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    Re: Drunk

    My goal is to fully experience everything I do and well, writing while being drunk is a way to make things clearer even if thinking isn't as easy. Let's say my thing I do when I'm under the effect of alcohol is that I insist on being okay and proving that I can still think. Another habbit is talking even more than I usually do...which get on the nerves of a few. Thanks for the comments everyone ^.^
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