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    Duality

    Born from a sculpture that loneliness inspired
    Being Dark for others while to others i bring light
    I have known love but it it was not returned.

    Waiting for something yet still unsure what it is.
    My soul is one with my other heart
    Loving someone but being torn apart

    My strength is his weakness
    My heart is my soul
    while to others i give inspiration
    to some i am darkness reborn.
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    Re: Duality

    "My heart is one with my other heart"

    I really did not understand this line. Ther was alot I didn't understand here actually...

    But I thought that first 3 lines were exeptionally thought prevoking "Born from a sculpture that loneliness inspired". What a wonderful way to start things off, I just wish that same strength was maintained through out.
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    Re: Duality

    thanks peach author's note ** will try to improve the themes i write. it meant a lot. but this was inspired by the series DN Angel
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