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Jun 03, 2008, 06:16 AM
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 Devoted Otaku  Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I am located in your imagination.....and dreams ***
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 Credits: 24,289 | Duality Born from a sculpture that loneliness inspired Being Dark for others while to others i bring light I have known love but it it was not returned. Waiting for something yet still unsure what it is. My soul is one with my other heart Loving someone but being torn apart My strength is his weakness My heart is my soul while to others i give inspiration to some i am darkness reborn.
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Jun 03, 2008, 08:30 PM
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 Femmebot's feel nothing.  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 2,989 | Re: Duality "My heart is one with my other heart" I really did not understand this line. Ther was alot I didn't understand here actually... But I thought that first 3 lines were exeptionally thought prevoking "Born from a sculpture that loneliness inspired". What a wonderful way to start things off, I just wish that same strength was maintained through out. |
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Jun 04, 2008, 04:59 AM
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Credits: 24,289 | Re: Duality thanks peach author's note ** will try to improve the themes i write. it meant a lot. but this was inspired by the series DN Angel
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