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    Dusk and Dawn

    Draggin Down, into Darkness...
    i cannot find my way out...
    the road to dawn, the night will consume my flesh,
    and rip apart my entire being.
    searching, wanting, i need the light.
    even if darkness is my life.
    take this blade, clear throughout the night,
    i will win, to regain my life.
    now i've found an ally...maybe two.
    my goal now revered, so i can help save you.
    my two powers, Darkness and this Blade, help defeat this evil
    throw upon to thou shade.
    i've lied,
    and cannot deny it.
    my eyes will be blindfolded,
    and who knows when to return.
    SaVe mE...the Road to Dawn...guide me through.
    follow me, as a lead a new life.

    -Tyler Mitchell....A.K.A. Dark Angel Swordsman
    A/N: first poem in like....a long time. based off of Riku's Struggle in the Kingdom Hearts series. Read and review...
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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    wow.thats amazing!!!!!<claps and whiseals>

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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    very nice DAS I like it


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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    wow that was amazingly well done, good job man, keep up the good work man.

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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    A writting well deserved for KH, though I haven't played the second one or the one on GBA, but I can clearly see the struggle that he's always faced with. A friend deeper in darkness than darkness itself, a person dearest to him that cannot be attained, life an endless challenge full of choices that not only affect him, but all around him....

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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    amazing. this was a great read.
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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    cool....nc one....looking forward reading ur work!

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    Re: Dusk and Dawn

    nice poem, i love how u describe it all. just great. well keep up the good work.

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