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Reply With QuoteOh that's sweet, and Kind. I like it. My like a family kinda poem. I liked.Keep up the work!
Wandering man, troubled past
saw the light in a passing glance.
He met a woman, long brown hair.
He protects her from great despairs.
Though they knew it
they spoke no word.
Lovers sound they had heard.
Acts to fight so no one knows.
Lady grows large, like friends and foes
As the two raise there spawn.
Father gets shot, now he's gone.
Little boy now big and strong,
protects his mother from dusk till' dawn.
Oh that's sweet, and Kind. I like it. My like a family kinda poem. I liked.
Haha, you mean the "father gets shot" part, Mr K? ^_^;;Originally Posted by Mr. K
Oh that's sweet, and Kind. I like it. My like a family kinda poem. I liked.
Anyway, the poem is quite good, nice and simple. I know how complicated it is to make a great poem but keeping the rhyme going as well.
Great job
you got her man.Haha, you mean the "father gets shot" part, Mr K? ^_^;;
lol man nice poem it is really kool, keep it up.
Heh heh, thanks, I try my best and I'll be working on more soon, this is just some of my older work
wait did u post this twice?
If they really had a desire to live, they would've been more aware of how easy it is to die.
That wouldn't happen 2 be a sequel from the othe poem is it? Well either way, its excellent.
Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
Nice, like the protection thing u got going on. N it rythms LOL. Tht's gd dude. Keep it up.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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