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    The Dying Rose!!!

    The years come rumbling back as
    you stand there with open arms wanting
    something that you thought was yours,
    tears fall like rain as the smile of another
    seems to come so easily without you.

    Time comes and goes as you wonder
    why the world is so cruel and against you
    and nothing is going your way , that emptiness
    feels your heart and soul as the coldness smothers
    you , how small and sad you seem as the world keeps
    moving and you stand still.

    There's no holding you back as that darkness
    comes over you and that hatred build , and you which
    everything around you would die or just disappear
    forever, you see them smile once more as they forget
    you ever lived or even existed.

    The time for you to move on is past and the time
    for you to grab another rose from that garden
    plucking it from its surroundings so it can be just yours
    has faded , those tears you once held back let them
    fall.

    You say that letting the rose sit there so you can
    admire its beauty is what love is all about is nothing
    but a shadow of what you think you love , the true
    love you want has been plucked from that garden
    and is growing in another's yard.

    Red rose ,White Rose , Yellow or any other
    colour is just a dwindling flower in your hands
    because you know nothing of love you just pretend
    at it so you can feel like you have something you
    know nothing about.
    ___________________________________________

    this poem is for those who think love is all about keeping something
    special like love planted in a garden when love need room to grow
    and if people can see that the love will wither and die just
    like that rose no matter the colour.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Dieing Rose!!!

    Wow... I can alway seem to find pieces of myself in your words. I would say, I relate... but it tends to go beyond that. Its more like you inspire me to look deep within myself and examine parts of me that I never knew exsisted.

    When I read this... I did more than see pieces of me in this poem. I saw pieces of this poem playing out my future.

    Thank you.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Dying Rose!!!

    I changed the title. You did mean "dying" right?
    As in "death" / "to die"?

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    Re: The Dying Rose!!!

    yeah i did thanks my spell check said the other way was right but thats
    what i meant
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Dying Rose!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    yeah i did thanks my spell check said the other way was right but thats
    what i meant
    That's because "dieing" is also a verb. It just has a different meaning.

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    Re: The Dying Rose!!!

    wow...truly inspirational.. @.@ good 1 dear friend... i like this 1 very much and i very much agree with peachy... ^^ would love to read more of yours in the future.. keep up the good work~!

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