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    Dying Soul

    Dying Soul

    As the days go bye,
    Slowly my soul dies,
    Wishing you were here with me,
    Standing by my side

    Never did I think,
    I'd live to see the day,
    That I'd have to live without,
    Talking to you in some way

    I don't like how this feels,
    Lonely and so alone,
    Like my life isn't worth living,
    While locked up at home

    Please come back to me,
    Bring back the light,
    The warmth and smiles,
    Help my soul come back to life

    *Dedicated to the one who has kept me going for so long, know that your loved and missed and you will always have a place in my heart that no one can replace, Thank you for always being there for me, you've saved my life countless times and for that, I will always be grateful*
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Dying Soul

    Wow that's a really good poem, you should really keep it up.

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    Re: Dying Soul

    I like This poem i wish i can do this but i need to experse my feelings into it!
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: Dying Soul

    Thank you guys.. I don't think it's all that great but it means a lot that you think so. ^^x..

    Lessangel: Just write when you get the notion.. don't force it and let it flow.
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    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Dying Soul

    It's beautiful really...
    I mean it..^_^...
    I can really place myself into it...
    Keep going on with writing poems...^_^...
    Would love to read more from you...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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