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    Dying For You

    OK! Guys... This is my first poem... Go easy on me. Please hope it's good *crosses fingers*


    ~Dying for you~


    Best thing about yesterday is were not dying.

    And could it be the last time we done it before?

    I know it's not. But, i won't attend to try.

    But, hold your breath because, it's gonna
    be the day i die for you.

    Just for you. I will not see another day

    It is true... My life is all for you.

    My life was all for you. Just hold your breath.

    And, do it for me and you...
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    Re: Dying For You

    This was interseting because, I dont know what this is about... and thats kinda the most apealing part about it.

    Well I certainly hope this won't be your last poem, I'd be interseted in seeing more from you.
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    Re: Dying For You

    heh. thank you! i never did a poem on AO... This is my first one.

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    Re: Dying For You

    Omg, this sounds alot like Fall For You by Second Hand Serenade...lol XD just slightly diffrent words...

    But, anyways, my favorite part of this is:

    But, hold your breath because, it's gonna
    be the day i die for you.
    Yeah, reminds me alot from a past epeirience. I love this poem alot, whether or not it's almost like a song I know! ^^



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    Re: Dying For You

    It has been brought to staff's attention that this is basically a very slight rewrite of "Fall For You" by Secondhand Serenade. After checking the lyrics to this song, I must say I agree that you didn't do much more than change a few words here and there; thus you've plagiarized. It's one thing to be inspired by song lyrics, it's quite another to blatantly rip them off.

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