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    Eagle spirit

    look into my heart and I see the spirit
    of an eagle fly
    High it soars
    Searching for its place in the universe
    But a shot brings it down
    an arrow through its soul
    Falling it dies I cover my eyes and weep
    taking a pen in hand
    I write
    Thoughts of the eagle as it re-enters my soul
    its spirit awakening
    My mind
    From the dark thoughts that have blinded me
    a light begins to glow Dimly at first
    It brightens as the pen flies
    across the page
    The cry of the eagle pen on its tip.

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    Re: Eagle spirit

    wow, i like the creativity in this poem. But punctuation would give it a better flow.
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    Re: Eagle spirit

    Slightly different to most poems and similar to some that i have read.Yes the creativity is ought to be mentioned as well as the lack of punctuation.Still,it was worth reading.

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    Re: Eagle spirit

    I liked your poem. It was really moving. I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Eagle spirit

    I almost leaked a tear, reminds me of the stories my mothers family tells me, i love being a Native American.

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    Re: Eagle spirit

    hey,I'm glad you like my poem.hey rockroc I'm glad that you love being a Native American,I'm proud of being a Native

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    Re: Eagle spirit

    awesome poem and the spriit of the eagle is
    in anyone that just accepts life and understands
    what real freedom is ,being a free soul is a pretty
    awwesome thing not many have or will experince because
    the world has numbed them.

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    Re: Eagle spirit

    i thought the poem was really good too and it is a shame that the world has numbed a lot of people... but it makes the people who do understand all that more important

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