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    earth

    Earth all we seem to do
    is hurt it
    swelled in with evil
    will it ever seaze

    we cause harm
    there is only now
    a hand full of
    people who seaze it

    they fill us with hope of
    a better world s with good people
    who discontinue all of the evil
    it will soon end the evil will end

    human being will rejoice the goodness
    of the new world
    but that is only a dream
    but it may come true


    hope you like it. i would like a peacefull world

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    Re: earth

    a peacfull wrold is what everyone want
    its dream that been around since green peace
    started back in the 80's dont get mewrong there
    have been other beofre them but they stand out when it comes
    to saving this planet.and this poem really give you a moment
    to ponder if we can save this planet or not i think we can, but its going to
    take work. this is what i got from your poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: earth

    Well, the wording is iffy. In fact, maybe you should try to elaborate more. Though, the idea is cute.
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    Re: earth

    eye a free poem..
    still it gives a word of freedom and peace.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: earth

    thanks all of you
    i tried my best

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    Re: earth

    i didn't know u were a poet. it was very nice and cute thought ^_^


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