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    Eccentricity of love

    I hate you because I fell
    Fell into what seems now like hell
    but then was what I believe to be love...

    But when push comes to shove,
    It's hard to pretend
    That this isn't the end...

    I yell with my eyes spread manically,
    Reflecting all the evil and obscurity that dwells within me,
    I yell with my arms wide and with a devious grin,
    My voice shrieking, piercing my own spine

    I HATE love, I despise everything in it,
    All the warmth and smiles I see around me
    I hate it with all my heart and consciousness
    There is nothing, nothing at all to see

    All the smiles, the joy, the laughter
    It SICKENS me, I can barely BREATHE
    I detest those promising touches and kisses,
    The gruesome thoughts of sweetness’

    The thought of someone being in another’s arms
    It’s agitating, oh that love
    It is so deceiving!

    Love is the same as war; the experiences you shared will never be erased
    But for some reason unknown, love is still highly praised
    Why does that mere … entity rules over all?
    For all I know it causes everyone to fall.

    But the irony is, for all I see
    Is that I think about love, to be free
    To live independently, to enjoy what seems to be everything
    To feel the warmth again, to experience what used to be nothing.

    I want to forget everything; I want to get rid of the burden
    So I can fly
    I want to lie down on the grass, under the sky
    I want to close my eyes, venture off to a place
    Where I can live life in a slow, enjoyable pace.

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    Re: Eccentricity of love

    the most sentence i like it ..
    I want to forget everything; I want to get rid of the burden
    So I can fly
    I want to lie down on the grass, under the sky
    I want to close my eyes, venture off to a place
    Where I can live life in a slow, enjoyable pace.
    i like it all the poem but these sentences more .....see more ...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Eccentricity of love

    man bro this poem is really intense and it shows you going
    down a road of lonelyness that i was on for 15 years maybe 16
    i lost count almost its true there has been someone there but with
    how love has treated everyone let things be and never really gave them
    what they deserved.

    for me this poem is where the road of a vagabond and roamer begins
    the detail was really great here i loved it.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Eccentricity of love

    Thanks Chris and XX ^_^ That one had a lot of work put into it, and I meant most of that last 3 paragraphs.

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    Re: Eccentricity of love

    rave ur poem is awsome ... but do u really feel like that??......

    my fav bit was
    the the smiles,the joy the laughter it SICKINS me, i can barly breath ideset thoughs promasing touches and kissesthe gusome thoughts od sweetness

    i loved that paragraph ^^

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