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    Echoing Plea

    There’s no one left.
    Only me.
    All alone.
    This can’t be.

    My friends,
    They left me.
    By myself.
    You call this free?

    No one to trust,
    No one to turn to.
    Nothing to say.
    Nothing to do.

    I can survive.
    I am strong.
    No, I’m not-
    I won’t last long.

    How will I live?
    I don’t know.
    I’m begging you-
    Please don’t go.

    You didn’t hear.
    My plea echoes on.
    Will you ever listen?
    Too late- you’re gone.




    Note: Averill and Michael, if you read this, please don't be offended. It was not written like that. Michael, I hope you don't move I still have no clue what I'm going to do without Averill. I'm so confused already.
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: Echoing Plea

    all i can say is great your begging had me wishing he would stay
    love can be a hard thing to gain for most but with time it happens
    tis poes reminds me of that. thank you for letting me read it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Echoing Plea

    the pain of having friends go is a pain that will affect our disposition. Trying to be strong but u know cant be coz u've always had those close friends to help u out but now the time has come for u to get stronger.

    Sad poem......good poem, keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Echoing Plea

    thank you holderofthedarkchalice and blade X. i still dont know how i can be strong. they still havent left yet, but they are going to different schools this year and one might move. so my problem really hasnt started yet and already i feel so weak and helpless- i have no clue how on earth i will make it through.
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: Echoing Plea

    sigh you know i will be only a phone call away at anytime!!! We will so talk on the phone every moment possible!!! I know that I wont be in classes with you but still youll have jazz and erin M and shelby and carmen and even allysa if your desperate. I really dont want you to feel abandoned, I WILL DO EVERYTHING I CAN TO LOSE ABSOLUTLY NO CONTACT WITH YOU
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    Quote Originally Posted by forever a dreamer
    Note: Averill and Michael, if you read this, please don't be offended. It was not written like that. Michael, I hope you don't move I still have no clue what I'm going to do without Averill. I'm so confused already.
    and you wont be without me sigh
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    Re: Echoing Plea

    I'm not a fan of this poem. short and sweet is definitely not a description. I would have been more pleased if the stanzas were longer.
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    Re: Echoing Plea

    averill, i think that this poem was a bit more about michael than you, because i know that you promised that we will keep in touch, and we will. michael, however, if he moves i have a feeling that that will be it. kasai, i normally do longer stanzas, but i wanted to try to get my feelings out in a bit different way. if you dont like it, then thats your choice, but i really dont care what people think about the length of my poems- if i get my feelings into them, then i'm happy with them regaurdless of the length.
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: Echoing Plea

    ok but i dont know if thats 100% true
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