That was so beautiful *sniff* I like. Well done Elie
Eight years
I’m sitting on my bed, looking
The curtains are blown open, unfolding
As the wind dances in the air, breezing
The moonlight shone in the darkness, glimmering
I help myself to the window stile
Somewhere on the outside world
I can hear a frog croaking and a dog’s howl
Weather in mid-September makes me shiver in the cold
Thinking of you makes me shudder
Thinking of you makes me sober
Taking my mind of you makes me ponder
How the things we used to have somehow crumpled
Eight years,
Eight times,
Eight holes,
Sealed into my broken heart
But I shall wait
No matter rain or shine
No matter thunder or rain
Till summer turn winter
To the ends of the world
Without you
A piece of me is missing
Like an unfinished puzzle
All my life I shall dedicate myself in search of it
For that single emptiness in me
So I shall wait
True to you
True to my heart
I shall wait
i think i'll stop writing.....![]()
Last edited by elie26; Apr 07, 2006 at 12:25 AM.
That was so beautiful *sniff* I like. Well done Elie
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Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
(just remove the "x" from the [x/img] tag!
*sniff* Good ... no its perfect ^^
Dam, tht's quite meaningful elie. Keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
i just don't know how u do it. anyway this is great stuff. i'm not a big reader but ur stuff really does get to me. so keep up the good, no, great work.
!!Sadness is what keep us alive!! nice poem elie16 keep it up.
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