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Apr 05, 2006, 11:54 PM
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 Elie Jelly  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement
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 Credits: 2,051 | Eight years Eight years I’m sitting on my bed, looking The curtains are blown open, unfolding As the wind dances in the air, breezing The moonlight shone in the darkness, glimmering I help myself to the window stile Somewhere on the outside world I can hear a frog croaking and a dog’s howl Weather in mid-September makes me shiver in the cold Thinking of you makes me shudder Thinking of you makes me sober Taking my mind of you makes me ponder How the things we used to have somehow crumpled Eight years, Eight times, Eight holes, Sealed into my broken heart But I shall wait No matter rain or shine No matter thunder or rain Till summer turn winter To the ends of the world Without you A piece of me is missing Like an unfinished puzzle All my life I shall dedicate myself in search of it For that single emptiness in me So I shall wait True to you True to my heart I shall wait i think i'll stop writing..... 
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Apr 05, 2006, 11:56 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: the village hidden within the leaves
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Credits: 454 | Re: Eight years That was so beautiful *sniff* I like. Well done Elie
__________________  Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics (just remove the "x" from the [x/img] tag! |
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Apr 06, 2006, 12:27 AM
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 I hate idiots on AO. Kill  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion.
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Credits: 14,478 | Re: Eight years *sniff* Good ... no its perfect ^^
__________________  Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. | .:~My AO Gallery~:. | | .:~The AO Rules~:. | |
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Apr 06, 2006, 11:52 PM
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 AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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Credits: 1,315 | Re: Eight years Dam, tht's quite meaningful elie. Keep it up
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Apr 07, 2006, 12:26 AM
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| Community Dude  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Australia, Newcastle
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Credits: 7,757 | Re: Eight years i just don't know how u do it. anyway this is great stuff. i'm not a big reader but ur stuff really does get to me. so keep up the good, no, great work. |
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Apr 22, 2006, 09:46 PM
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| Vampire Prince  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: right behind you ~*don't move*~
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Credits: 1,190 | Re: Eight years wow! you shall become a poet!!!!! this poem is hella kool!!!!^^ keep it up yo!
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