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Old Apr 05, 2006, 11:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Eight years

Eight years

I’m sitting on my bed, looking
The curtains are blown open, unfolding
As the wind dances in the air, breezing
The moonlight shone in the darkness, glimmering

I help myself to the window stile
Somewhere on the outside world
I can hear a frog croaking and a dog’s howl
Weather in mid-September makes me shiver in the cold

Thinking of you makes me shudder
Thinking of you makes me sober
Taking my mind of you makes me ponder
How the things we used to have somehow crumpled

Eight years,
Eight times,
Eight holes,
Sealed into my broken heart

But I shall wait
No matter rain or shine
No matter thunder or rain
Till summer turn winter
To the ends of the world

Without you
A piece of me is missing
Like an unfinished puzzle
All my life I shall dedicate myself in search of it
For that single emptiness in me

So I shall wait
True to you
True to my heart
I shall wait

i think i'll stop writing.....
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Old Apr 05, 2006, 11:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Eight years

That was so beautiful *sniff* I like. Well done Elie
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 12:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Eight years

*sniff* Good ... no its perfect ^^
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 12:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Eight years

That's sad love. You had me at the end. Great!
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 11:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I love it elie
although I dont cry it was sad
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 11:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Eight years

Dam, tht's quite meaningful elie. Keep it up
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Old Apr 07, 2006, 12:26 AM   #7 (permalink)
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i just don't know how u do it. anyway this is great stuff. i'm not a big reader but ur stuff really does get to me. so keep up the good, no, great work.
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Old Apr 09, 2006, 01:22 PM   #8 (permalink)
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!!Sadness is what keep us alive!! nice poem elie16 keep it up.
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Old Apr 22, 2006, 09:46 PM   #9 (permalink)
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wow! you shall become a poet!!!!! this poem is hella kool!!!!^^ keep it up yo!
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Old Apr 22, 2006, 09:53 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Its just like the others, a real master piece, keep the good work

well, keep the awesome work
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