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    Eight years

    Eight years

    I’m sitting on my bed, looking
    The curtains are blown open, unfolding
    As the wind dances in the air, breezing
    The moonlight shone in the darkness, glimmering

    I help myself to the window stile
    Somewhere on the outside world
    I can hear a frog croaking and a dog’s howl
    Weather in mid-September makes me shiver in the cold

    Thinking of you makes me shudder
    Thinking of you makes me sober
    Taking my mind of you makes me ponder
    How the things we used to have somehow crumpled

    Eight years,
    Eight times,
    Eight holes,
    Sealed into my broken heart

    But I shall wait
    No matter rain or shine
    No matter thunder or rain
    Till summer turn winter
    To the ends of the world

    Without you
    A piece of me is missing
    Like an unfinished puzzle
    All my life I shall dedicate myself in search of it
    For that single emptiness in me

    So I shall wait
    True to you
    True to my heart
    I shall wait

    i think i'll stop writing.....
    Last edited by elie26; Apr 07, 2006 at 12:25 AM.

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    Re: Eight years

    That was so beautiful *sniff* I like. Well done Elie

    Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
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    Re: Eight years

    *sniff* Good ... no its perfect ^^

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    Re: Eight years

    That's sad love. You had me at the end. Great!
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    Re: Eight years

    I love it elie
    although I dont cry it was sad


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    Re: Eight years

    Dam, tht's quite meaningful elie. Keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Eight years

    i just don't know how u do it. anyway this is great stuff. i'm not a big reader but ur stuff really does get to me. so keep up the good, no, great work.

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    Re: Eight years

    !!Sadness is what keep us alive!! nice poem elie16 keep it up.

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