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    The Elements Chant

    Water
    Form the Circle that binds us all
    To allow Love to replace anger and hatred

    Fire
    Form the Warmth that calms us when we are frighten
    To distribute the Fruit of today’s hopes and happiness

    Wind
    From the Bells that ring so true
    To forbid the Darkness from coming into our hearts

    Earth
    Form the Home that we all share
    To create the Roots of tomorrow’s dreams

    With this poem I would like it to see it writing in japanesse kanji
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    Re: The Elements Chant

    very nice, i like the elements, very orginal.
    I like the water the best

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    Re: The Elements Chant

    Thank you. I made a few weeks ago before I became a member.
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    Re: The Elements Chant

    yes very good, Grass hopper... -_-.
    so are you writing any more? go write more now...
    but remember to spell correctly...please I beg of you.
    but I like the fire chant like the previous post said very original.

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    Re: The Elements Chant

    Very nice "grasshoper" (lol I like that nickname) anyways back on topic, I like the earth chant, and yes I agree very original. keep it up man. hum yeah agreed with overload Please use spell check man it is there for a reason lol anyways nice job.
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    Re: The Elements Chant

    All now I need it is some one to like Wind's chant and I will have all the elements liked.
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    Re: The Elements Chant

    Really nice... As anime_being_good said- very original to use the elements like that, I realy found that wonderful... And also what you said was nice and with a thought, though I would present the differences of these elements much more if I did something like this.

    But I liked how this was like a plan how to build our lifes. That is a plan everyone should follow in a way... Nice...

    I especially like the Earth part... "Roots of tomorrow’s dreams"- it sounds so special, so magical, so warm, so safe and homy... I really like that line...

    Anyways- this is a really nice work and I hope to see more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: The Elements Chant

    Thank you I try my hardest to place uniqueness in all my poems.
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