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    Re: Elie26's work

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    I think this is great, If i get it, i think it is about hope and it has a really positive feeling .
    GREAT!

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    Re: Elie26's work

    You have the art of poet writting in you. amazing work. I liked "A LITTLE SOMETHING" that was very well done and kinda makes you think of that speceil someone. It works well and is so true. Emotions can really grow and travel quickly

    Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
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    (just remove the "x" from the [x/img] tag!

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Well well well! Elie work has not stop suprising me! tsk tsk tsk! Elie tell us your secret to this.

    I think elie's writing is great for her age, and it will get better with time.

    Great work elie!
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    Re: Elie26's work

    Known not to shiver as the chilly wind hits it
    Or even when the typhoon is in place
    Never wavering an inch
    Till the end of time…
    wow elie
    I'm truly shocked by your level of poetry ^^ I love it!!


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    Re: Elie26's work

    Potentially lost by the many choices behold
    Not being able to know what’s right to wrong
    I specially liked this part of poem, something just gives me beatiful thoughs.
    Whole poem in nicely formed and maybe bit lonely image...
    Maybe I'm wrong but I got picture of someone who is strong and lonely.


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Profound knowledge grows now and then
    With these little decision known to appear
    Only with your simple instructions and advice
    That I was able to pull it through
    Elie!! Your work is simply superb. ^^ Your use of words complimented the atmosphere nicely.

    I eagerly await more of your creations. ^_^

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Lead the way

    The fog thickens in this day of time
    Unknown and mystery lurks behind each mist
    Unable to comprehend the truth
    As the curtains hang loosely around us

    Being with you feels right
    Knowing you were once a part of this broken family
    Your little soul touches my heart
    And leads the way

    Innocence is brought down with a force
    Pure thoughts were ruin just then
    Broken pieces is scattered on your face
    Expressions play across it, making me think

    Cruel fate twisted before our very eyes
    Ripping the bond that held between us
    Unable to share our thoughts in peace
    Leading to a sad and gruel ending

    Was everything we shared gone?
    Or was it just images portrayed in our minds
    The very fabric of reality shown in our naïve eyes
    Our paths are laid in front to be choose

    Fate in our palms
    Destiny to our choice
    Make yours now
    Something you would never regret…

    This is something I wrote to a lost of a friendship. Too bad it didn't worked out.

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    Re: Elie26's work

    i love this.
    i know the feeling.

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