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    Re: Elie26's work

    It sounds like a wonderful relationship between father and daughter with the father holding years of wisdom that he longs to pass onto the being he cares most for

    Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
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    Re: Elie26's work

    I could never possibly repay everything you’ve did
    The love you showered, the care
    Only hoping that one day I can make you proud
    Your tears of happiness means the world to me
    The best gift a kid could ever have
    Yes, true...
    Really nice poem, gives nice reflection what relationship
    between mother and child should be...unfortunately I can't
    say same thing.

    I think that many moms would start to cry if they would recieve
    this poem as present...again great job.


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Quote Originally Posted by HibikiLink View Post
    It sounds like a wonderful relationship between father and daughter with the father holding years of wisdom that he longs to pass onto the being he cares most for
    Heh... I wrote the word MOTHER in the poem so er ...XD and like i said...this is sorta a story coz there's a continueos poem to it.

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    Re: Elie26's work

    ok... it took me a while but man, i couldn't believe how much i've missed again...

    anyway.. i love this poem, the one about the mother. where would we be with out our mothers.. well for one thing i wouldn't be a mothers boy lol j/k j/k..

    and i think it was a smart thing to break this poem up. theres no way anyone could properly discribe how much mother give us life in just one poem..

    so i'm interesting in what the next poem is goin to be like.. never read a continuous poem..

    well i'm lookin forward to what is coming next, and like always keep up the good work...

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    Re: Elie26's work

    This one is really beautiful *tears*
    how u express ur feelings in this poem is just so great

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Quote Originally Posted by elie26 View Post
    Being young

    Looking back when I was young
    How you used to cradle me to sleep
    Humming that familiar lullaby into my ears
    The time when I just close my eyes without a worry
    Drifting of into your warm arms

    The sacrifices you made all this time
    Left scares in your deepen and tired features
    But still as I reach out to touch that sleepless face
    Your smile bounces back as you watch me
    Turning into the angel I’ve knew once more

    A hug and blessing from each of their mothers
    A word of love and care from them
    And never hoping to have a fraction of repayment…

    There is a few other pieces coming that is contineous to this one. I hope you can comment honestly. Thank you.
    Wow a poem dedicated for mothers!!! ^^
    this poem carried me away, if i'm going to read your poem to my mom, she'll surely shed a tear. I liked the stanzas above. the idea of selfless love is what i liked the most. because it is true.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Elie26's work

    it makes me wish i had a mother

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