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    Re: Elie26's work

    I read them. Elie. I like your work. To bad you didn't make this before. But I like it. ROOT!! ROOT!! There is nothing bad to say about them. So I lhave no bad words towards these poems. You know. Keep doing it.
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    Re: Elie26's work

    i just saw ur second poem and i gotta say its dark but..... I LIKE IT...
    and i have to admit that ur poems just seem to be at the same level as they always are and that is, magnificent. i have to say that i really like the 2nd stanza in this poem, i dk y i like it, i just do.......
    anyway looking foward to ur upcoming poems like i always do.

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    Re: Elie26's work

    I like your work.....

    Keep it up, you have talent.

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    Re: Elie26's work

    WOW . . . . . . thats really deep and yet i'm very compeled by it. It looks asthough it takes the view of someone who feels seperated from the rest of the world due to something horrible that has happened in his/her past. I really like this and it is very well planned out. "I bear the mark of disgrace in my blood". I can't tell if this line is the fault of a father or mother being evil or something or having your blood tainted by that of a bad father or mother. However I think this is a neat poem. Thumbs up

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    Re: Elie26's work

    slowly i will reveal part of what i really feel inside....so juz keep a lookout! but some r fake...so it's for u to figure it out

    What it’s like

    I want to know what its like is
    To be known, to be heard
    I’m sick of being shunned away
    Locked up in the closet where lights never shines in it
    No longer wanting to be in the shadows of others

    In my dreams, in my thoughts
    I wish, hope and pray that this day would come
    Till one faithful day that god gave me this blessing
    I was finally accepted, finally loved

    Little did I know it was merely a show
    A fake, a hoax, nothing more than a play
    They show care, love and faith in me
    Behind, all they do is despise me with all their might
    Rumours begin spreading, doubts begin rising

    Till I was finally locked away again
    Back to the life I’ve once had
    Standing beside the wall, hoping to be part of it
    People walk pass and go
    Looking at me like I’m some kind of joke
    A clown, a fool of a circus road show

    I only blame myself for the state I am today
    Pretending nothing ever happened
    My presence soon fades into thin air and was finally forgotten
    Buried in my heart lies a tied knot
    Burning to be untied and released
    But only with time it will heal

    Seven years since it happened
    Looking back sometimes…
    Some wounds run too deep to be healed
    Some things can’t ever be erased
    So moving on is the only way, the only way I guess…

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    Re: Elie26's work

    it seems like you went in circles in this poem

    this had a nice flow to it my fav part of the poem
    Buried in my heart lies a tied knot
    Burning to be untied and released
    But only with time it will heal
    this kind of had the same flow but the ending was forced
    Some wounds run too deep to be healed
    Some things can’t ever be erased
    So moving on is the only way, the only way I guess…
    which you seem to do in all ur poems stopping them before their finished


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    Re: Elie26's work

    Wow

    Both of your new masterpieces are awesome, yet dark, creates a dark image in my mind and wonder ...

    Could you be the greatest poet and artist in the making ^_^

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    Re: Elie26's work

    Like rave said, both new new poem are really great.
    Personaly I liked the whole impression that R.I.P. gave.

    In my dreams, in my thoughts
    I wish, hope and pray that this day would come
    Till one faithful day that god gave me this blessing
    I was finally accepted, finally loved
    And this was a great part, really beatifull.
    I don't know but somehow I think that Zackraa has point
    about your poems ending before the end(complicated lol).
    But really nice line untill the end, keep-up the good work.


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