Hey everybody, I made this a long time ago and I never got to get it on here, but anyways tell what you guy's and girl's think! ^_^
Crushed in a sad world
Looking for a way out
But the door is locked
I couldn't scream or shout
Can't solve a problem
A riddle can't be answered
What must I do?
Find a cure for cancer?
I wanna be in a better place
Trying to get away from here
Not running from emotions
Only away from fear
Too scared to face these demon's
So many hurting each other
I grew tired of this pain
But it's getting harder
Each time I resist
It's dragging me deeper
No longer reaching for the surface
I am now called "The Grim Reaper"
Hmmm... I like it... feeling that I have never felt- kind of evil... and sad and confused. Something really new to me... I'm quite speechless I guess ^^ lol
Anyways, I enjoyed reading this, you've done a real nice work with this one!
i love it although my favorite of yours is the one that goes
i stand in a rain of thunder
my blood washing down on my face
why do i do this
my feeling is so disgrace
and so on and so forth old poem though
So much sadness in this one poem so much emotion as well to me! I love this poem it was just so great and it's cool that you made this a long time ago! I hope to see more! :D:
I can relate to this poem almost,yay!
It was an excellent poem to read.I enjoyed every stanza of it,touching yet sad.